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Dear native English speaker: correct the grammar error please?

Dear native English speaker: correct the grammar error please? Topic: Learn how to write a paragraph
July 20, 2019 / By Bethel
Question: Please correct the three sentences in English here. "I wrote three paragraphs below in German to introduce myself and would be very happy if you correct them. How can I help you with your Japanese/English though? If you introduce yourself or write me your diary in English, I can tranlate them into Japanese. My teacher told me that it is a great way to learn languages. The paragraphs are here. Let me know if it was too much for you, so I will write you shorter next time."
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Aggye Aggye | 2 days ago
I wrote three paragraphs below in German to introduce myself and I would be very happy if you could correct them. How can I help you with your Japanese/English though? If you could introduce yourself or write me a diary in English, I can translate them into Japanese. My teacher told me that it's a great way to learn languages. The paragraphs are here. Let me know if its too much for you, so I can write it shorter next time.
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i wrote three paragraphs below, in german, to introduce myself and would be very happy if you corrected them. How can i help you with your japanese/english though? If you introduce yourself, or write me your diary in English, i can translate them into Japanese. My teacher told me that it is a great way to learn languages. The paragraphs are here; let me know if it was too much for you so i'll write them shorter next time.
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