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Please help me to revise this letter. (English grammar problems)?

Please help me to revise this letter. (English grammar problems)? Topic: Letter of application asking information
July 20, 2019 / By Irvine
Question: I requested for a 2 bedroom but wasn't sure whether or not I will be placed in. I was going to ask you if I can change my floor plan to a 3 bedroom because I saw that there were 8 more rooms available. But if I will be placed in a 2 bedroom, that's fine. I will take this lease. I'm sorry if I made you confused. Here are the documentations with my signature. I was trying to pay for the prepaid approval through the website, but some how I coulnd't login. It showed me that due to recent upgrades, your ResidentPortal(TM) account has been closed. Is it ok to create my ID again? I'm asking this because I have already created one and it had the information of my onlice applications.
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Fabian Fabian | 10 days ago
I requested two bedrooms but I wasn't sure whether or not I would receive this placement. I was going to ask if I could change my request to that of three bedrooms because I saw there were eight more availabilities. If, however, I am placed in two bedrooms, that will be fine. I will take this lease. I'm sorry if I have caused confusion. Here are the documents with my signature. I was trying to use prepaid approval through the website but couldn't log in. It showed that "due to recent upgrades your ResidentPortal(TM) has been closed". Is it OK to create my ID again? I'm asking this because I have already created one and it contained the information in my online applications.
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Fabian Originally Answered: HEY ENGLISH PEOPLE! I'm writing a letter in English. Would you check it for grammar and help make it better?
RE-write Hello Danny, On the website I am asking the donors to notify us of their donations via email or contact form. I am also asking they provide their contact information so that we may express our appreciation, and whether or not they want to remain anonymous. I believe we should include our company's email address on the site to make sure we get these emails. Regards, Diana
Fabian Originally Answered: HEY ENGLISH PEOPLE! I'm writing a letter in English. Would you check it for grammar and help make it better?
Hello Danny, On the website, I am asking the donors to notify us of their donations by email or via contact form and provide their contact information so that we may express our appreciation. Please let us know if any of the donors want their names listed on the website or if prefer to stay anonymous. I think we should include our company's email address on the site to make sure we get the emails. Regards, Diana

Crispian Crispian
I asked for accommodation with two bedrooms, but I am not sure if my request has been successful or not. I should like to ask if I may change my request to accommodation with three bedrooms, because I see that eight other accommodations are available. However, if I am allocated two bedrooms, then that is acceptable. I shall take the lease. I apologise if I have caused you any confusion. Here are the documents, with my signature. I tried to pay for the prepaid approval through the website, but for some reason I could not log in. The website indicated that, because of recent upgrades, your ResidentPortal(TM) account has been closed. Is it in order for me to create my ID again? I ask this because I have already created an ID, and it had the information from my online applications.
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Ashton Ashton
It looks fine to me. Just some mistakes though. These are the changes you should make "I requested for a 2 bedroom, but wasn't sure whether or not I will be placed in it" "But if I'm going to be placed in a 2 bedroom, then that's fine." "Somehow" <
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Ashton Originally Answered: Who would like to read my letter and help edit my English grammar?
I disagree with the decision that the Examination committee has made.(not has BEEN made) XXX XXX was the only person in my group.(was not IS) For the other project (Crosstrack), I knew I could not rely on her anymore and she disappeared again so I decided not to contact her and did everything all the way alone and I finally manage to finish my project. (take out WAS before disappeared) So I came to the college on Monday, 16th June, I printed both of my assignments in color in the Resource Centre and after that, I gave my assignments to XXX in the administration and signed two late work forms accompanied with the copy of my medical certificate (COMMA after that) Thirdly, I think it is unfair being the one who has completed all the work but I have received a fail and XXX who did not come to class and did not complete anything and she received a pass in this subject. (SEE CHANGES) Because I had the same attitude in all of my subjects that I have done in semester one and I handed in all of my assignments for each subject. (take out the "s" in the last "subjects") I am very disappointed with the college’s Late Work Submission system, how they can lose a student’s work, I think this is ridiculously wrong and it is the administration responsibility. (switch "can" and "they") This is a valuable lesson to me; now I understand how important it is to hand in my assignment directly to my lecturer and nobody accept myself could be trusted. (semi-colon after "me") wow.. I feel bad for you I hope they really listen to what you have to say and give you a passing grade! That really isn't fair for you. I admire your courage! GOOD LUCK!

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