Please correct the grammar mistakes in this text. guess my English level. Thanks?
Topic: English information and ideas writing a book
July 20, 2019 / By Mick Question:
Topic: Write about "censorship of books". Include both pros and cons.
In my opinion, we have two kinds of censorship. In one kind you censor some information in which the main concepts and ideas will be the same as it was before censoring. This can be good when we want to protect some children from information which is bad for them. Even though, by this kind of censor the emotions of writer might not completely transfer to readers, but it probably can be necessary some times. The other kind of censorship is the one in which meaning of context and purpose of writer will become totally different from that was before censoring. It is like that you have written a new book and you sell it by the name of the main writer. This kind of censorship that is unfortunately the prevailing censorship in our country is certainly unfair work and is vilified and condemned by good people since if you want to change the meaning why don't you write a new book?
Best Answers: Please correct the grammar mistakes in this text. guess my English level. Thanks?
Judd | 8 days ago
In my opinion, we have two kinds of censorship. In one kind, you censor some information in which the main concepts and ideas will be the same as it was before censoring. This can be good when we want to protect children from information which is bad for them. Even though this kind of censoring might prevent the emotions of the writer from completely transferring to readers,however it probably can be necessary sometimes. The other kind of censorship is the one in which the context and purpose of the writer will become totally different from that was before censoring. It is as though you have written a new book and you sell it by the name of the main writer. This kind of censorship, which unfortunately is the prevailing type of censorship in our country is certainly unfair and is vilified and condemned by good people, since if you want to change the meaning why don't you write a new book?
I don't know about english levels since i'm only 13 :D
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"Childhood's End" is one of the best books I have ever read. This is a science-fiction book which was written by "Sir Arthur C. Clarke", one of the most famous writers to use this style. It tells the story of some aliens who come from an other planet and conquer the Earth by directing people their way. After a long time, it is revealed that those aliens, themselves, obey another creature called "Overmind", who is very powerful and rules almost the whole world in ways that he wants. The story comes to an end with the destruction of the Earth and with the people merging with the "Overmind". I was really moved by this incident and I thought about it very much. I thought about the loneliness of mankind and its destiny. Who knows what the story of men will be? Who knows why humans seem alone in the world? I wish I could find the answers. I recommend that you read this book. It really helps you to become detached from the usual thoughts for a while and to think more deeply, beyond the routine.
I would guess that you are not used to speaking English and feel slightly uncomfortable using it, though you most probably studies it up to a tertiary academic level.
I think your justufucation of censorship is totally wrong. Censorship can never be justified. To paraphrase what you said: If you want to change a book, WHY DON't YOU WRITE A NEW BOOK.
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You have a great command of the language and you can aim as high as you like whether it is GCSE or "A/As" levels etc and why not if you want to!?
I hope you go far and Good luck......it seems OK to me so please do not worry!
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I dont know and in my opinion this text is correct for me..i think you english level is is is is is is is is i dont know... XD im only grade 6 and i dont know what english level you are..
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Originally Answered: Any grammar mistakes in this text?
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